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		richcollins on May 14, 2010 \| parent \| context \| favorite \| on: Rate my new startup, Appointment Reminder IMO the page is too busy. The value proposition is lost in a sea of text. Maybe try something simple and straightforward: http://www.apple.com/macbookair/ Using your value prop: "Stop losing money on missed appointments"

petervandijck on May 14, 2010 [–]

Agree with that. Something like: "(value:) Stop losing money on missed appointments (large font). (how it works:) Send automatic phonecall reminders to your clients."

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